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Help! Story Review →

Hi, I’m currently developing a game for a Masters final project and I need some help. The story of the game needs to be strong enough to support it. Therefore, I need as much constructive criticism as I can get on it.

'This Time Around' is an exploration game where you will travel with Rachel Dawson, a lost teenager, on her journey to forgiveness and adulthood through the rediscovery of old memories. If you have the time, please take a look and leave some feedback. Thank you!!